Poor choice of words

July 24, 2015
Joe Murphy
South San Francisco

I find the wording of the headline above the front-page article regarding SB 126 (July 10) to be a poor choice. Perhaps it was written tongue-in-cheek or it used common language for legislative actions, but some additional consideration was in order before headlining that the bill “... appears dead ... .” It was outside the language CSF should use and invites comments such as: Did it die a natural death? Or was its demise hastened by the actions of others? It can detract from the seriousness of the issue. Thank you for your consideration.

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